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Oh, what be this substance that makes me feel so warm and flushed on the outside and yet so cold and empty in my heart?

It be not ice.  For ice, though imdeed it chills the inside, leaves the skin numb, and my flesh quickens to wound from before.

It be not fire.  For though fire burns the skin to pain, it also warms the soul with bright passion and life, that which mine lacks.

Oh, what be this substance that I abhor and yet drink in like water to my thirsty mouth. How can I be so chained?

I am a fool!  It be love for HER that binds me so, that burns me and numbs me for lack, mocks me and my ignorance.
No stanzas. Read it just like you would prose.
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logonomicon Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2009
"and my body gets hurt faster than usual," be a translation.
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mooshu17 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Hah, I know how you feel, but it's not all that bad is it? Well done. I don't really understand this line though:
"and my flesh quickens to wound from before." Do you mind elaborating?
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logonomicon Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2009
I don't know if I ever replied to this (I posted, but I doubt you saw it) so I'll actually reply to it this time (sorry for the lateness)

"and my body gets hurt faster than usual," would be a translation.
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mooshu17 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Cool, thank you.
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logonomicon Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2010
You're welcome. I'm glad you liked the poem.
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anniefeng93 Featured By Owner May 16, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww. Logon. :heart: It seems like your in LOOOOVVVEEE.
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logonomicon Featured By Owner May 16, 2009
Or I have bit a mild crush. Or I'm overly poetic.
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anniefeng93 Featured By Owner May 17, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
lol. your both.
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malz110 Featured By Owner May 14, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
it reminds me...
of a pirate.
O_o
in a good way! xD


it's good.
i like it. :3;;
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logonomicon Featured By Owner May 15, 2009
A pirate? Mind explaining that one?
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