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Oh, what be this substance that makes me feel so warm and flushed on the outside and yet so cold and empty in my heart?

It be not ice.  For ice, though imdeed it chills the inside, leaves the skin numb, and my flesh quickens to wound from before.

It be not fire.  For though fire burns the skin to pain, it also warms the soul with bright passion and life, that which mine lacks.

Oh, what be this substance that I abhor and yet drink in like water to my thirsty mouth. How can I be so chained?

I am a fool!  It be love for HER that binds me so, that burns me and numbs me for lack, mocks me and my ignorance.
©2009-2010 ~logonomicon
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:iconra7ar:
nice writing

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:iconmalz110:
it reminds me...
of a pirate.
O_o
in a good way! xD


it's good.
i like it. :3;;

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got a {knife-throwing) kind of L O V E
<3
:iconlogonomicon:
A pirate? Mind explaining that one?

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:iconmalz110:
lol...
i'm not sure if i can. xD;;
it's just my weird mind working...

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got a {knife-throwing) kind of L O V E
<3
:iconluveydovey93:
Awww. Logon. :heart: It seems like your in LOOOOVVVEEE.

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Love,
Annie
:iconlogonomicon:
Or I have bit a mild crush. Or I'm overly poetic.

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*insert amazing cleverness here*
:iconluveydovey93:
lol. your both.

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Sometimes, progress can only be made by failures. The harder the fall, the better you learn.

Please visit my account: [link]

Love,
Annie
:iconmooshu17:
Hah, I know how you feel, but it's not all that bad is it? Well done. I don't really understand this line though:
"and my flesh quickens to wound from before." Do you mind elaborating?

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"Happiness is a choice that requires effort at times."
Anonymous
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"and my body gets hurt faster than usual," be a translation.

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