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Girl with the long black hair,
Will you ever know I care?
You’re never to be touched or held.
How can I with your heart meld?

Girl with unending smile,
Would you stay with me a while?
Of course, you never look my way,
And I cannot make you stay.

Girl with the wit so bold,
Oh what power o’er me you hold.
But you say we both are kid,
And my affection thus stays hid.

Girl with beautiful voice,
How I wish I were your choice.
But your words are to my dismay,
Whenever that I look your way.

Girl with heart of gold,
No one else makes me so bold.
Alas, when we work together,
My wit seems weak, as a feather.

Girl with the long black hair,
Girl with unending smile,
Girl with wit so bold,
Girl with beautiful voice,
Girl with heart of gold,
These girls are not one,
So it seems to me,
That love is no fun
In puberty.
Yeah, this poem started out so solemn and melancholy, and then I go and make a joke out of it at the end... I actually wrote this as a couplet for most of it, didn't I... I actually used a rhyme scheme?!? Insane.
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anniefeng93 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
That is really sweet! ^^
Love it!!!
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Evilpom Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2009  Student Writer
I have a guess on who its about, and trust me on this...STAY AWAY.
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logonomicon Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2009
I don't get it, unless I do get it...

Either way, no, this was written in a science class that had a lot of girls that I had had crushes on at one time or another in it, and I was like, "Wow, that would make a totally cool poem."

And I wrote it. I love how random I can be.
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malz110 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
LOL!
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